Tuesday, September 19, 2006

Futility

The little candle eagerly waited
For the match to
Light the flame
And make its life real.
And it waitedAnd waited……


As
All the matches
Were staring at the lamp
And the wonders of electricity
Hoping they could be a
Part of thisNovelty.
Wondrous and beautiful
Full of light….
And the candle and the matches
Waitedand waited
till eternity....

4 comments:

Sunil said...

Kindly explain the cases and the wordcohorts. I am deep in in million speculations

Sumita said...

I wish I knew enough to explain...

Its written...and here it is ..the poem..

You are free to make a million speculations...isnt that what poetry is for?

Like a verbal rorschach?What say?

asuph said...

Sumi,

I liked this one better than a lot of your earlier poetry -- mainly because the metaphor is so universal... yes, the more the speculations, the better, AFA i'm concerned.

keep writing,
asuph

neha said...

hi sumita,

fascinating read. :)

another take on a similar topic -http://airisinthelove.blogspot.com/2006/11/candle-two-versions.html